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  My name is Keiya. I'm the Substitute Gym Leader of Ecruteak, a Kimono girl, a Psychic and a Priestess, but I'm also one of if not the last of my class of trainer, you may remember us from Lavender Town, the Channeler Class. I was young when it happened. When they showed up…Team Rocket.
  I still have nightmares about what they did to that poor Marowak and what happened to me. I was I believe eleven or thirteen when it happened, it's hard to remember most of that day. I just remember that boy, the one whose name was the first color of the rainbow, Red.
He saved me from the spirit that had possessed me and I am forever in his debt. After that I couldn't look Morty and my Haunter in the eyes, I was afraid.
  I didn't want to be bound to my home by duty anymore, but I couldn't leave my friend alone with his evil grandmother Agatha. So I stayed and decided I would become the substitute gym leader because I knew there were days when trainers would come and he would not be there but either at his shop or staring at Bell Tower all day.
  But back to the point at hand. That day I saw what happened to the poor Marowak, she was beaten badly by their Pokémon, Mr. Fuji then showed up trying to stop them. So I ran back down the stairs to get help from my Mentor but, it was too late. I had made it to the fourth floor when I felt it. The rage and hatred take over my senses possessing my body to fight whoever came my way.  
  When Red got there and fought me I wanted to destroy him but he beat me breaking the hold the Spirit had on me. I am forever grateful to him. But a few years later my class was changed to Medium…but no. I stayed a Channeler to remember that day at the Pokémon Tower.
This is my first Creepypasta so please be kind in your review. It's about My Character Keiya who is a psychic like Sabrina minus the whole turn family and others into dolls thing. She is an unknown Dex Holder known as the Gatherer because of a quirk in her DNA that causes Pokemon especially Legendary Pokemon to come to her. I hope you like it!

EDIT! I've revised the story as per the request of the creepypasta admins.

Pokemon belongs to Nintendo, Game Freak and Satoshi Tajiri
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Shibalove Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2011  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Go psychics!!!
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AlicePhantomhive1 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
YES!!
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Shibalove Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
:dummy:
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AlicePhantomhive1 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks?
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Shibalove Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2011  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
it's good :D
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AlicePhantomhive1 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
thanks!
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KitsuneEXE Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2011
Not particularly creepy. More like an origin story.
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AlicePhantomhive1 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
true. but like i said first time writing a creepypasta. and I like to think of this as a sort of memorypasta.
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KitsuneEXE Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2011
Mm, well it's good to reminisce, but it's not very creepy, and therefore cannot be considered creepypasta. The mere possession isn't really enough considering nothing was really born from it.
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AlicePhantomhive1 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
Well like I had stated it was my first time trying to write one so it's not that creepy.
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